Act 3 Continuation.
[CHILDREN run into the room, followed closely by NURSE]
Nurse: [Shooing them] Children, go back to your rooms! It's much past your bed time!
Children: Daddy, where is Mommy going?
Torvald: [After much deliberation] She will be gone for a while. She has some business to take care of. But she will be back soon enough.
Nurse: Go back to bed now.
[CHILDREN run out of the room]
Nurse: Where did Nora go?
Torvald: [With a pained expression] She has left me...left us. She says she needs to find herself and become independent.
Nurse: Did she say anything about coming back? About the children?
Torvald: She said the only way we could get back together is if we each changed so much that we could have a "real marriage".
Nurse: And the children?
Torvald: [With a look towards the childrens' bedroom] She said that she was never a real mother and they are better off without her.
Nurse: [gasps] We have to go after her! She can't just leave her babies!
Torvald: There is no use. I tried my best, but in the end it's her decision. The only thing left for me to do is hope I can change, for her.
Nurse: What a concept! It must be a great challenge!
Torvald: Indeed it will. But I must do it! There is no other way for me!
Nurse: You care that much?
Torvald: Why, of course I do! What would give you the notion that I don't?
Nurse: You didn't exactly show it in your every day interactions. Why, I imagine that's partially why she left!
Torvald: Excuse me! I don't need to take any of your nay-say. I will do everything in my power to bring her back! I swear it.
Nurse: So be it, Mr. Helmer.
That alternate ending was great! I really liked how you showed another side to Helmer that expressed his motivation to change for Nora. I also liked how the nurse called him out on not showing his emotions for her regularly.
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DeleteAloha, I love Porky the pig at the end. Anyway i enjoyed the optimism that Torvald had to getting Nora back. In all honesty thought I don't think she will ever come back. All together very nice ending, good job.
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